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40 Minutes
Contributed by
Man_On_High
on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 10:50:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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I' got 40 minutes to write a line
a simple moment caught in time...
a mis-communicated thought,
something simply I cannot!
Don't have time to see it through,
to write this down is all I do-
margin not for error here
thinking fast
and seeing clear,
manifest beyond my fear...
shakin' now like srpent's end
"margin not" I must rescind-
I ask you not to hold me too
when I said:
"won't see it through"
My 40 minutes burning fast,
wanting it to longer last...
knowing soon my 40 minutes
will be in the past.
M.O.H.
Copyright ©
Man_On_High
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2005-05-12 22:50:59]
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Re: 40 Minutes
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by Jimmato on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 10:58:03 PM AEST
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| Totally engrossed in the poem and then the last line just finished short, kinda like your time limit. nice. |
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Re: 40 Minutes
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 11:07:10 PM AEST
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| Nice poem.. i liked it:) |
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Re: 40 Minutes
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 08:33:29 AM AEST
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love this poem great rhythum 2 it was tapping my foot as i read it . . .
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Re: 40 Minutes
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by In_a_while on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 12:37:34 PM AEST
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| A very stylin' poem, I liked the rhyme and feel of the words. Keep up the awesome work! |
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Re: 40 Minutes
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 09:17:54 PM AEST
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This is just beautiful!!! How touching and filled with love .
Leia |
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Re: 40 Minutes
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 05:14:04 AM AEST
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| Very interesting write, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Great job. |
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