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No Man's Land
Contributed by
dtborchert
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Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 06:16:58 AM in AEST
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Im on a path to no mans land,
Which no one man can survive,
No man is there quite often,
Each day from nine to five.
No man is just a number,
No man, no face, no name.
No man can do him under,
For theres no man there to blame.
This mans No Mans Land,
Is open everyday,
Drop on in and visit,
But No ones No man can stay.
No ones No man can come,
If hes feeling lonely,
Cause No Mans Land is just
For no man one and only.
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dtborchert
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2005-05-13 06:16:58]
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Re: No Man's Land
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 11:18:42 AM AEST
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i found this much deeper than it appeared the first time i read it, and i love your ending, very clever, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: No Man's Land
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by Shishke_Bob on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 03:18:29 PM AEST
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| this was a very well writen poem, and yes I to know of a no mans land for I to have no one but take heart in knowing that there are somthings that are ment to be. who knows you might yet find your one and only . hope to read more from you. Be well |
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Re: No Man's Land
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 02:01:22 AM AEST
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No man is an island,
for you bet he looks and sees,
and stares across the water,
to where his life force flees,
for trapped he is in no mans land,
but only bodily,
will the fates take hold his hand?
and hear this no mans pleas? |
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