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Endless Lonliness
Contributed by
infernality
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Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 01:09:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Pointless struggle to keep moving on
What has come now has gone
Lonesome cries in the dead of night
Endliess love ending life.
There is no point to live in dreams
Tapped in the house of Broken screams
Here I stand to give you warn
the only being is being alone
Nobody in the dessert of times rolling sand
'cept you in the middle with nobodies hand
Continue to walk down lifes bitter path
Some will walk by, but lonesom youll pass
Your forever alone in a world of hate
walled in by disgust without heavens gate
ripped by the demons who breathe down your neck
no god nor devil have you ever met
Carry the wait of the world on your shoulders
To know is a curse the grows as your older
to see past the mirror, to see past what is shown
Takes you to a world where your only alone.
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infernality
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2005-05-13 13:09:03]
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Re: Endless Lonliness
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by heartless_soul on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 02:28:44 PM AEST
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| I have known the truth in your words and it does hurt, but eventhough you tried you were still far off the mark (but the closest I have seen sence I got here) this cut to my core and it was good to know that there are others out ther who know what it feels like, but I am sorry that you know this feeling (you only know these feelings if you have experienced them) this was a very good poem and I did like reading it, hope to read more from you later. Be well |
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Re: Endless Lonliness
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by hollyc-state on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 03:00:24 PM AEST
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| Is feeling of being alone is all to fimialar. Yet someday, something will come along and give us all, who are down, a reason to keep moving on. : ) |
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