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The Chance
Contributed by
hollyc-state
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Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 02:53:16 PM in AEST
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Your first butterfly.
Your first rainbow.
Your first time to drive a car.
Your first time to travel so far.
My first time to see you change.
My first guess to what life really is.
And what I found is...
That life is only true to you.
Thank you for the chance to rediscover the world.
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2005-05-13 14:53:16]
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Re: The Chance
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by Shishke_Bob on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 03:01:47 PM AEST
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| this was a very sweet poem and I am sure that it ment alot to the person you wrote it for, (though I would like to know who it was writen for and I am sure that there are others who wold like to know as well.) it was well writen and had a good feeling about it. hope to read more form you later. Be well |
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Re: The Chance
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 03:56:02 PM AEST
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This gives me an impression of a flow from innocence and ignorance to discovering the world.
Wonderfully and cleverly done.
Thank you for sharing this! |
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