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A New Poem
Contributed by
SLiM_eLviS
on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 01:11:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The profound abysmal depths
Where I reconcile
Is birth-giving to this amour
Surely it keeps me existent
As I inhale deep thoughts of you
They mark themselves within this ballad
Giving creation to this cultivation of emotions
And every declaration amidst this ode
And like the ardent fiery embers
My soul takes its demise within this verse
Anxious to know it meant something more
And in you its vigor sojourn again
Yet untried sentiments are drawn from me
And new waves breathe on the seaside
And within you I exhale this fervor
So that you draw in this breath of mine
And a new poem is arisen
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2005-05-14 01:11:23]
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Re: A New Poem
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by Kyarn on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 04:37:24 AM AEST
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| Wonderful! It's eloquently worded and beautiful. |
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