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A Boiling Finish
Contributed by
papaya322
on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 10:44:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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The rain falls slowly
Silencing the dead winter night
She sits alone
Always and forever lonely
Her mom, she just hits her
The dad doesnt care
Her emotions were a roller caoster
She decided to end it then and there
The knife was grabbed
No, that wouldnt do
The hands cupped the pills
Impossible, her death would not be true
So she stepped in the shower
To cry her life away
Then she saw the knob
It was the only way
Soft hands caressed the knob
Now was the time for this hell to end
She turned the knob right, she screamed, her heart throbbed
She was dead, death by burning, it was the only cause.
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2005-05-14 22:44:13]
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Re: A Boiling Finish
(User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygirl1991 on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 11:01:10 PM AEST
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| this was a very good poem with a whole lot of emotion keep writing, great thoughts please read my poem called"hardest thing" and tell me what yew think thanks, keep writing ~Chrissy |
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