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I Once Had A Heart
Contributed by
wlamom
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Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 11:54:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I once had a heart and it was true, but now it's gone from me to you. So take care of it like I've always done, because you now have two and I have none.
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2005-05-14 23:54:53] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I Once Had A Heart
(User Rating: 1 ) by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 04:14:12 AM AEST (User
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This was done so well. Although i wish it was a bit longer.
But non the less i liked this.
Hugs,
Jane xxx |
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Re: I Once Had A Heart
(User Rating: 1 ) by xXcrossedXx on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 08:46:19 PM AEST (User
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I like this, kind of a bitter sweet ending. Beautifully written, as most of yours are :)
Great write,
--amanda-- |
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