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the tears
Contributed by
sweetnsilentsoul
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Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 12:19:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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i lie here awake not able to sleep
the thought of you just makes me weep
i know your gone and it hurts so bad
i think of the fun we never had
how i never got to have that one crazy dance
or see you eyes sparckle when you found romance
ill never get to hold your hand
and watch you take your first steps as a man
you were the best friend i ever had
if only i wouldv seen that you were so sad
you never let out any tears
and i always thought you had no fears
maybe if i would have said those three simple words
then you wouldnt be soaring high with the birds
i guess now all i can ask is why i couldnt see behind the mask
so before all the pain will go theres one last ything i have to know
why couldnt you have let me in and let me see the tears you never show!!!
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Re: the tears
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 03:16:59 AM AEST
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hello,
very emotional and yet sad poem.I understood perfectly what you were talking about and almost close to losing my best friend too,i stopped him 4rm killing himself,he rarely talked about how sad he felt,it's hard.Don't worry,he loves you and it was much pain to him i think,see you go down as he went down too,wish this was said before,but noone will ever take away 4rm u what u have 4 him and what u guys have,and that's what's special.t/c and peace 2 u.
love,
andrea |
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Re: the tears
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by poetrygirl1991 on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 08:46:30 AM AEST
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| very good, but very emotional poetry, i was put in the same situation not to long ago, and i was the person that was on the life/death route. but i made it thru, sorry for ur loss, read mi poem "hardest thing" if yew get a chance, and tell me what yew think, thanks ~Chrissy |
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Re: the tears
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by Noelia on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 08:11:58 PM AEST
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| Ur poems good! |
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