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SHE'S GOT YOU BY THE BALLS
Contributed by
jyssvw22
on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 04:38:08 PM in AEST
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Knock their socks off
Show them what you got
The competitive beast in you
Is dying to be let out
Take her by the hand
Tell her who you are
Show her what makes you a man
Show her how she is a flower
Feel your muscles burn
Feel your paranoia shrink
Defend yourself when they stare
Stare back at them until they blink
Say hello when she winks
Dont be afraid to speak
Youre just like her past lovers
Only they have already seen
She does this every weekend
She wont return your calls
You beg and plead your message
Yet shes got you by the balls
All these women call you
Yet she remains the prime
Object of your affection
She does this every damn time
The past is in, well, the past
And you my dearest
Can never last
For in your darkness
The stars kindly ask
To disappear one time
And never come back at last
Careful what you say to her
Wouldnt want to offend
Prompt service was expected
Now you can wait until your dead
Dinner for two please
The reservations are made
Sit and enjoy the conversation
As the glimmer from her eyes begins to fade
Ironic as the rainy wedding day
Not ironic one bit
The sad truth behind the music
Is that you are a perfect fit
The conclusion of the ramble
Is that you must move along
The delusion you hold on to
Will wither you to the bone
You come to me as a friend
I speak to you like a monk
I give you my greatest gift
The gift of getting drunk
In your dizziness
A vision will appear
The ghost of your dreams
Has come to bite off your ear
Then tell you a story
Of how it seems...
Copyright ©
jyssvw22
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2005-05-15 16:38:08]
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Re: SHE'S GOT YOU BY THE BALLS
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by MorningDove on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 06:17:29 PM AEST
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Well, my, I don't quite know how to comment on this one. Pretty powerful message that it sounds like someone should truthfully heed. Splendid work.
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Re: SHE'S GOT YOU BY THE BALLS
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by emystar on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 06:49:00 PM AEST
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An incredibly strong write.
A masterpeice of wisdom.
huggs,
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Re: SHE'S GOT YOU BY THE BALLS
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 11:44:28 PM AEST
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Great story , Great write, wonderfully expressed. i love this. The title really caught my attention !! LOLs .
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Re: SHE'S GOT YOU BY THE BALLS
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by brokenwings on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 06:49:13 AM AEST
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| i think i understand this completely funny how the undeserving ones can steall a mans heart.. but the one who will love them completely the way they deserve to be lost are often left behind..great job |
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Re: SHE'S GOT YOU BY THE BALLS
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 01:29:32 AM AEST
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Hmmm...not sure how I haven't commented on this sooner...with the title and all...LOL j/k This write is fairly straight-forward as far as who it's directed at (mainly...) I do however read some lines that sound suspiciously like they're directed inward...I won't speculate any further, but I will say, this is a well written piece, and it's one of a few I've read that seem like important stepping stones...(However small they may be...still counts amigo)
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