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my weakness
Contributed by
emokid
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Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 09:00:51 PM in AEST
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You come across my mind
when I'm the weakest
and I want you back
But I know I really ****** up this time
You have someone who deserves you
and I'm all alone once again
I know in the depths of my heart
I can't handel you
But I keep wanting more
I feel so scared
and it's all my own **** fault
call me the king of failure
everything I touch turns bitter and crumbles
I'm tired of failing
I'm to the point of breaking
what's the use of getting up?
I'll just be knocked down again
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Re: my weakness
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by sprinter27 on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 09:11:46 PM AEST
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this is a good and powerful write. i'm sorry it's happened to you, but we all make mistakes and the only thing to do is move on. i know it's hard and there have been many times i've said why get up? or what goes up has got to fall. but really, no matter how my times you are knocked down, the only thing to do is get up. hope it all works out. keep up the good work.
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Re: my weakness
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by Fears on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 05:12:35 PM AEST
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wow, that was really great! A great visionary comes into my mind when I read the following words......"I'm tired of failing
I'm to the point of breaking
what's the use of getting up?
I'll just be knocked down again"
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