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Meet Me In Mountana
Contributed by
gangster
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Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 01:02:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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wrote my whole life down in a note book
soungs bout you and me and i sing to every sole in my city
but no body seems to listen no one seems to smile ,
the way that you do.
so i you'll never here me on the radio ,
so i'll give up that crazy dream of mine to hold you once
more.
but you left town for hollywood loking for a part to play.
you say cas i always you have such a pretty face.
but you say you guess you not that pretty,you say no one looks at you
but youll always be a movie star to me
so wount you meet me in mountana,
i want to see the mountain in your eyes, i've had all
the life that i can handel wount you meet me under
that big mountana's sky.
now were stuck here in these hills that there call mountains
darling right back in your arms were i belongs and where
i want to be.
Copyright ©
gangster
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2005-05-16 01:02:19]
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Re: Meet Me In Mountana
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 01:12:48 AM AEST
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Awesome writing.
If u want your spell check just click yes and moderators will check it for u.
Keep writing as u r a good writier.
huggs, smiles,
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Re: Meet Me In Mountana
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by SocialMisfit on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 02:30:12 AM AEST
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very cool poem, bbut i agree with emy the spell checker would make this even better, i cant say much tho cuz i cant spell worth beans lol.
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