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My pain
Contributed by
edward_jarvis2000
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Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 10:39:47 AM in AEST
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My pain is like a thron,
ripping through my skin,
My pain is like a termite,
it eats me alive,
my pain is not the same,
it changes everyday,
my pain is like concrete,
rock solid,
my pain is like a knife,
cuts through everything.
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2005-05-16 10:39:47]
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Re: My pain
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by Archie on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 12:50:01 AM AEST
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Re: My pain
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by Archie on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 12:50:12 AM AEST
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| Good write. (Watch the misspellings) |
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