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Breakfast at night
Contributed by
jyssvw
on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 12:23:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Breakfast at night
The medium is broken
High multidirectional flight
The propeller has dropped
The bulge of lightning
Sends a quick shock
The fisherman tumbles
Rolling along on the dock
Double the dosage
Its effects numbing
Sustained unnatural tolerance
The chemicals dissolving
Blowin away
A feverish depression
A drugged delay
So begins the infection
Ears keenly aware
Specs of dust breach
Sensation barriers
Wisdom you can not teach
A love story
No need to ever speak
The tragedy
Climatically peaked
Habitually late
Guests never arrived
Conveniently delayed
One sided compromise
Dominant features
Aged skin-lines hide
The inner creature
Who dwells inside
Progress is compared
Normative populations
Regression impaired
A future uncertain
Chronically feared
Silver gates of heaven
An almighty revered
He has not forgotten
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jyssvw
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2005-05-16 12:23:20]
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Re: Breakfast at night
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by Man_On_High on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 09:53:41 PM AEST
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wow!
this is masterfully written...
and if ya ask me..ya not gettin enough comments on it..
imagery and metaphores blew my mind..
incredible!!
I love it...
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