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Death of a Marriage
Contributed by
bethie
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Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 01:10:14 PM in AEST
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MiscPoems
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My story absurd may not be loved an emotional murder that has never been solved
late one night waiting for him to come home long anticipating for my time not alone
biding my time with that and with this contempalting a crime that he helped commit
I saw him deceive me with a clandestine kiss you may not believe me but I aimed not to miss
deceitfullness like soft bullets fired; were felt , but not heard left me cold and uninspired and that is my story absurd.
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bethie
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2005-05-16 13:10:14] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Death of a Marriage
(User Rating: 1 ) by DanishPoet on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 02:28:53 PM AEST (User
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Very emotionel, and somehow very different than most other poems that I've read.
A good one.
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Re: Death of a Marriage
(User Rating: 1 ) by DorianChambers on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 02:35:07 PM AEST (User
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A beautiful poem despite the tragic out come
i wish u well, keep writting . . .
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