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On the Edge
Contributed by
ilovecasey
on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 02:44:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I cant breathe
im slipping away
I cant take it
not for another day
when i get home
I take a knife
and slit my wrists
to end my life
as I lay there
I do not feel
this seems like a dream
it doesnt seem real
the doctors voice
sounds loud and faint
he says Im gonna live
but I know I aint
my mom comes in
and sits in a chair
my dad follows
but doesnt seem to care
is this real
or is it in my head?
I slit my wrists
shouldnt I be dead?
my mom asked me
why I did this
I guess I did it
b/c i was *****
the next day at school
I realized what I had
I had friends that cared
my life isnt so bad
they asked me
what happened to my wrists
I told them my story
and how I was *****.
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2005-05-16 14:44:08]
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Re: On the Edge
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by ilovecasey on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 02:51:01 PM AEST
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| i love my poem its one of my favorites. enjoy it. |
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Re: On the Edge
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 03:09:22 PM AEST
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| This is sad but good! |
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Re: On the Edge
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by DoomedCuthulu on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 03:11:45 PM AEST
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| Lucky person... |
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Re: On the Edge
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by deathdrop on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 03:22:03 PM AEST
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is this a true story?
... it's very inspiraional any way. i liked to read it, but it's so sad! |
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Re: On the Edge
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by ilovecasey on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 01:45:22 PM AEST
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| yes it is a true story of my life and what i went through. |
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