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Ashes
Contributed by
Lone_er
on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 10:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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What good is ones life
When all is said and done
For what does one stand
When it all comes undone
Where is the reason
To brave a new day
Only to see our children
Whither and wilt-slowly pass away
I care not to live
In a world full of alcohol and drugs
Amid people of no understanding
Pushers and pimps, gangbangers and thugs
Hopes once held for tomorrow
Have all deserted and fled
Tonight I gather ashes
Of a future all but dead
Perhaps death indeed is a friend
Delivering me from the insanity today
Just like my hopes - my dreams
I throw my life away
Russ
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Lone_er
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2002-12-30 10:30:00]
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Re: Ashes
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 01:17:05 PM AEST
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Russ,very good advice & words indeed!
So very sad! Christina |
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Re: Ashes
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by OreO on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 04:14:29 PM AEST
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Russ you truly know how to give some strong good advice in this poem my friend, it's very deep and heart felt and so sad yet full of inspiration, i hope this person reads this and it hits home with them....i hope your friend see's what you are trying to do for them....my heart is right there...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: Ashes
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 05:34:17 PM AEST
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Great poem..and message, Russ... This is really good...
Jenni |
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Re: Ashes
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by thorns on
Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 12:35:43 PM AEST
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| very dark and depressing. |
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Re: Ashes
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by Ash on
Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 01:21:20 PM AEST
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| This is a very powerful, and very wise poem. I wish I could help a friend ofmine to understand it. Thanks for sharing it, I love it. |
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