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lost beauty
Contributed by
Jan_Oskar_Hansen
on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 11:30:00 AM in AEST
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Lost Beauty
Suddenly shes aged, wrinkles
have permanently settled in her
face despite creams that promise
eternal youth. Massages her throat
dont want all the folds I have got,
keeps her chin up avoid looking
down that make her trip on
uneven pavements and often fall.
Does my wrinkles show? she asks,
eyes begging me to say no.
You are as beautiful as you where
ten years ago I say and kiss her nose.
Im not a thief a robber of illusions.
Copyright ©
Jan_Oskar_Hansen
... [
2002-12-30 11:30:00]
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Re: lost beauty
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 12:34:58 PM AEST
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| how sweet and very touching, if youth could only stay, thanks for sharing this one |
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Re: lost beauty
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by Jayraja on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 12:55:12 PM AEST
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Wow, This is beautiful. You do have a kind heart my friend.
Love from India - Joel - |
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Re: lost beauty
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by rustygrl33 on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 04:17:20 PM AEST
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| that is really sweet |
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Re: lost beauty
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 06:04:16 PM AEST
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Lovely write, Jan... Happy New Year to you and yours!!!
Jenni |
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Re: lost beauty
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by kevy on
Thursday, 10th December 2009 @ 10:02:48 PM AEST
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beauty is so skin deep
thank you, I enjoyed |
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