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Slowly going insane
Contributed by
sick_n_twisted
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Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 08:50:10 PM in AEST
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Im trying to stop myself from going insane
covering my ears pretending I cant hear!
screaming soundlessly
Im trying to stop myself from feeling pain
I pick up the blade and throw it across the room
Your screaming so loud
I cant hear myself think
its so hard to keep myself from screaming
Sighing heavily
sweaty palms
racing heart
I think the walls are caving in on me
Losing my vision as everything turns black
STOP screaming at me
Im going crazy
I try to keep it inside
Suddenly I let it all out scream cry and rip everything apart
I cant help it
I tried I tried
to keep calm and not go insane but I couldnt!
A calm afternoon turned into another fricken' madhouse!
stop screaming at me!!
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2005-05-16 20:50:10]
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Re: Slowly going insane
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by poet70 on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 08:59:11 PM AEST
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| I am sorry, once again tho, you was very good at expressing your feelings, emotions, and what is going on, keep writing, it will help you out some, but I hope the best for you. I have been there, and it is a bad place. I feel for you sick. Best wishes. Good writing. |
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Re: Slowly going insane
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by Fears on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 09:29:29 PM AEST
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| your words are filled with emotion and hate, at some parts of it sound like...my family...and it makes me sad that any one can have so many horrible feelings and memorries making them be able to write something so horribly amazing...(am I making any sence??) |
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Re: Slowly going insane
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by Man_On_High on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 09:32:10 PM AEST
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ya speak vloumes in jus' a few short words...
thank god for poetry..its kinda like therapy..
intense write twisted...
M.O.H. |
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Re: Slowly going insane
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by hardrocker15198916 on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 08:50:35 PM AEST
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Thats a deep and very emotional poem
i enjoyed every last line
good work
-->Rae |
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Re: Slowly going insane
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by angel_eyes70 on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 11:41:04 AM AEST
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Loved The Poem! Lots Of Emotions For Your Family
*Huggs And Kisses*
Kimmy |
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