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This Rage Inside
Contributed by
Nomad062303
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Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 11:23:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Right now I'm raging
Can't see, can't feel from this battled I've engaged in.
If someone could feel my pain
they would've been lost control because it's too much to sustain.
My heart is literally breaking,
You walked away from it making my heart feel forsaken.
How could you do this to me?
Making me blind to see
nothing but my heart's desires
And since I can't seem to get it I've grown tired
How long can this rage inside of me go on?
I'm crying out for help, have been doing it all along
But why hasn't anyone answered my call?
Can't seem to figure that out at all
Don't want to feel this rage anymore
Body shakes, soul aches, heart is just too sore.
I have to gain control again,
Before this rage marks the end...
OF ME...
Copyright ©
Nomad062303
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2005-05-16 23:23:42]
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Re: This Rage Inside
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by Live2Die on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 11:42:15 PM AEST
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I love it, until the end "OF ME" the caps seem to extreme and loud and ending for this sorrowful, heartbroken poem. This is a wonder poem, I can really feel what you mean. Nice, keep writing.
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Re: This Rage Inside
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by zalzool on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 08:47:32 PM AEST
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Good write ...
keep it up ...
i agree a lil with live2die bout the caps part
although i really liked the poem :) ..
and if u need someone to talk to im here :))
tc now
ZAL |
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