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Ennui
Contributed by
bethie
on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 12:03:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Sleeping behind my screen
resisting to be awoken
but there are places that
I have never seen
languages yet to be
spoken
You painted my portrait;
and begged me to look,
I refused to see it,
prefering an obsolete
book.
I would like to make
a film together,
one about time and space;
upon a chair of white leather,
I sit in a gown made of
black lace.
This case of curiosity
craves for a change of pace;
An antidote for my ennui:
another fantasy to chase.
Copyright ©
bethie
... [
2005-05-17 12:03:59]
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Re: Ennui
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by In_a_while on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 01:41:38 PM AEST
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| Whoa! That was really, really good! It was quite unique from what i usually read. I'm especially fond of the imagery in your third stanza, with the black lace on white leather chair. A very striking write, Keep up the great writing. dw |
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Re: Ennui
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 03:10:10 PM AEST
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What a well written piece. This was really lovely i love the simple imagery you have set.
Excellent stuff, i'll look out for you more often.
Jane xxx |
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Re: Ennui
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by DorianChambers on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 05:58:01 PM AEST
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Very beautiful in deed, a nice style u have . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Ennui
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 04:40:24 PM AEST
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Excellent! The language and imagery are both very well done, invoking a highly poetic, and even a bit mysterious, feel. Keep it up!
Andrew |
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Re: Ennui
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by CaseyRedman on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 03:53:36 PM AEST
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| good poem |
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Re: Ennui
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by CaseyRedman on
Tuesday, 6th December 2005 @ 03:54:40 PM AEST
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what exactly is this poem about
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