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you see the real true me
Contributed by
ilovecasey
on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 01:50:49 PM in AEST
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you see
the real true me
I hope we can
forever be.
forever be
here by your side
walking together
as we take each stride.
I cant express
how I feel
we'll get through rough times
even though theyre hard to deal.
I love you
with all my heart
I pray everyday
that we wont ever part.
you think you see
all there is to see
but you dont know everything
that is wrong with me.
Skyla Dawn Benson
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ilovecasey
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2005-05-17 13:50:49]
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Re: you see the real true me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 01:58:34 PM AEST
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this is a great write.
I love how you wrote it.
the emotion and question at the end
the deication it shows
great write
keep it up!
keep smiling
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