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Memories of you
Contributed by
stonedraider23
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Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 07:29:50 PM in AEST
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Just boring and pointless
Meant to be alone
Left to be alone
Hurt, scars all over
Tears rolling down from my eyes
Pain in my heart
Memories driving me mad
Deleting and trashing everything that reminds me of you
Thoughts of you running dry
Almost gone from my mind
Nothing to look forward too
Tears and thoughts brought back
Not by you but by your friend
Tears filling my eyes everything I almost forgot
Almost erased from my memory
Surrounding me and pulling me down
Brought back like it never left
Harder then before
Why cant we be friends
Well that I dont know
Talking with you knowing I lost my chance
That I couldnt live with
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stonedraider23
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2005-05-17 19:29:50]
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Re: Memories of you
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by sp3llicup on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 08:23:54 PM AEST
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this is a good write...i like it alot..yeah ive had those feelings plenty of times...but you do use the word tears alot..i was kind of thinking you could use different words for it..but other than that this is awsome..i like it alot.. hope you write more so i can keep reading them
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Re: Memories of you
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by cheech on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 04:26:22 PM AEST
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nice poem,keep up the great job,sorry for bringing back the pain
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