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Silently Falls
Contributed by
blue_angel
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Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 08:10:03 PM in AEST
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the rain is pouring onto my skin
comfortable in this skin im in
refreshing to the taste and the touch
liking the sensation too much
caressing me with the water so cold
cleansing through my heart and my soul
the rain gently massages my shoulders
as the air slowly gets colder
i wipe the wetness from my palms
water dripping down as i try to stay calm
im finally ready to let go of it all
and i feel drops of rain as it silently falls
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Re: Silently Falls
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by MorningDove on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 08:26:38 PM AEST
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It is a lovely poem. Yet it seems to need a little more feeling/passion. JMHO
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Re: Silently Falls
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by Jaycee on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 03:29:14 PM AEST
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| I don't think this poem is so much about passion as that it is specifically about passion. In a life that has been filled with way too much it is nice to have the rain clean you off from all of that, like a big sigh of relief. That sigh is, one would view from the outside, anticlimactic, but on the inside it is your release, your freedom. Not with a bang, but a whimper... or maybe in this case, a whisper. Nice write. |
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