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Pulling Teeth
Contributed by
girltranscended
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Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 09:24:17 PM in AEST
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We are the glass that I have broken,
when destiny and love deceived you.
We are a mass of words unspoken
and not the end that you agreed to.
In the bar that night, in the fog, in the rain,
I wanted desperately to believe you.
So if the memory of me
keeps pulling heart-strings,
pulling teeth,
at the end,
remember just one thing.
There is a sense of renewal
that even death can bring.
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2005-05-17 21:24:17]
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Re: Pulling Teeth
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 09:33:54 AM AEST
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oooo bitterness and hurt combined with a tooth ache make for a great write about a failed relationship.
But I like the hint of hope for a better future at the end(at least thats how I'll read into it :) ) |
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Re: Pulling Teeth
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by vox on
Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 04:41:22 PM AEST
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| the pain of a break up and the pain of a tooth ache seem to really fit.they both hurt like hell.good going |
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