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Supernova Basement
Contributed by
jyssvw22
on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 10:04:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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ll that is an illusion,
Its just a matter of space and time
Recall the three dimensions
That constricts the movement of our kind
Predict the amusements
And calculate the abusive
But the facts remain behind
You are just human
Specs of space dust outlined
In the supernova basement
The astrologer reclines
In the meantime on the pavement
The newspaper reports the crime
And the realization of the moment
Smacks you in the face one time
Get up and get movement
Your time is winding down
Forgo the possibilities of being found
Forget the realities,
You once considered so profound
Fragment the ideologies,
As opposed to them being compound
Fear the proposed remedies
The shadows lurk downtown
I withdraw my previous words
I beg of you, dont be absurd
I would never have said those things
Had I just been listened to and heard
I would have not expressed my rage
I would have kept a cleaner record
So believe it when you hear
That the pictures scenery was a fraud
Deliver it when youre near
Ill be waiting here,
Right on this rocking chair
Looking forward to your return
Had I seen it,
I might had have been concerned
But as it stands, and it stands high
The appreciative attitude
Has served you your last cry
A comprehensive alibi,
Why would you lie
A decisive jury,
No where to hide
All this culminates in a sad tale
All this confusion dissipates
As the night bearer, rings her bell
All these illusions anticipate
A resolve that sets them straight
An answer for their losses
A true moral high debate
The radiation that emanates
And the lamp that illuminates
Silhouettes so determined to escape
The metaphorical predicament
We find ourselves trapped in
Who can we trust
When the sunshine had collapsed
When the clouds are dust
When my emotions
Are left to
My
Self,
I
Copyright ©
jyssvw22
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2005-05-17 22:04:17]
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Re: Supernova Basement
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 01:08:13 AM AEST
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Well this is a somber piece! Even so, there's some strong determination evident as well...Which makes this write stand out. Reading this, it gave me some really good visuals, and the ending is appropriate somehow...Nicely done again jyss.
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