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-x-x-x-x-Harem-x-x-x-x-
Contributed by
mina-1
on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 12:26:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Into the Harem you entered
Every veiled dancing women abroad
You lustfully search
After your long day on the road
Dancing women surround you
Bodies motion to and fro
With hungry eyes you look on
Desires start to over flow
A veil covers my face except my eyes
As I seductively dance towards you
With my hips swaying cannyily
I make you dance with me too
You stare into my mystical eyes
As I do my seductive dance
Desires burn deep within
As I keep you in a trance
My flesh you long to taste
My body you want to touch
You want to fulfill your manly urges
The sparks of lust burn too much
You can no longer take it
You fall down to your knees
As you hold my hand
In your eyes a desperate plea
You unmask me from my veil
As we dance our way into a room
You kiss away at my body
The lighting is so dull and loom
Erotic fantasies emerge
As ecstacy over flows
A taste of heavenly flesh
Lets temptation sinfully glow
To my chambers in the Harem
Each day you make your way
As I seductively do my dance
My hips cannily sway
There I do my dance
Especially for you
Ecstacy takes a ride
All the night through...
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mina-1
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Re: -x-x-x-x-Harem-x-x-x-x-
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 12:33:49 AM AEST
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Well I reckon you'd definently get what cha wanted. Also every male that reads it will be hipmatized into your spell.
Good work.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: -x-x-x-x-Harem-x-x-x-x-
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 12:46:36 AM AEST
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"Ecstacy takes a ride
All the night through.."
and what more we desire!!..
God bless..big hugs :-)venkat
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Re: -x-x-x-x-Harem-x-x-x-x-
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by ForeverAlone on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 01:16:41 AM AEST
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Yes, Um Sue....Do I need to say anything... =]
As Always
~Clark |
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Re: -x-x-x-x-Harem-x-x-x-x-
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 01:17:58 AM AEST
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wheww Sue this is seductive to say the least passionate visulas you leave in the readers mind
Michelle |
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Re: -x-x-x-x-Harem-x-x-x-x-
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 01:36:18 AM AEST
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Sue, this was hot and passionately done.
Now thats what i cal hotttt. LOL.
Lovely write Sue.
Jane xxx |
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Re: -x-x-x-x-Harem-x-x-x-x-
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by jmpy84 on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 02:20:32 AM AEST
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| a diffrent side of you great job sue |
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Re: -x-x-x-x-Harem-x-x-x-x-
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by Man_On_High on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 02:28:51 AM AEST
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phew..
that was beautiful
last 2 stanzas took my breath away
literaly...
genius..
B
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Re: -x-x-x-x-Harem-x-x-x-x-
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by Sinned on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 07:10:31 AM AEST
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Mina-1
I see you know the power of woman.
Already I wish to play
To watch you sway
Night and day
Loving passing time away
Together at last we lay
You describe a beautiful scene
I hope I didn't make it obscene
I enjoyed this poem
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Re: -x-x-x-x-Harem-x-x-x-x-
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 08:47:54 AM AEST
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| WOW what a dance what a poem what a poet ,,I'm in awe,,,,,, |
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Re: -x-x-x-x-Harem-x-x-x-x-
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by sride686 on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 10:22:24 AM AEST
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| Well Sue this was a good write and a little more vivid then most of your work. Wish I was doing that dance in the poem LOL. Know I’m just play in but it was a good write and I love the lust in it. I miss that feeling and can’t wait tell I can lust for someone I love again. Life has been crazy today so not much time to write so I’m sorry but I have to keep it short. Take care my friend…Steve |
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Re: -x-x-x-x-Harem-x-x-x-x-
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by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 02:26:38 PM AEST
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Wow this was steamy passionate and full of desire.
After a few glasses of wine it really made me have hot sweats (calls out to hubby darling)
Just going to get my veil out and my belly dancing attire lol.
Superb stuff
Love Angelxxx |
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Re: -x-x-x-x-Harem-x-x-x-x-
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by jyssvw22 on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 05:10:24 PM AEST
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holy ***** that was great,
just great!
thank you for letting me read it.
bye.
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Re: -x-x-x-x-Harem-x-x-x-x-
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by loveisendless on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 10:18:18 PM AEST
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That's so hot it could set ice on fire!
Light up my love,
& let it burn all the way,
from every thing above,
to every last turn to play,
watch the flames,
as they burn so true,
& they spell out your name,
S.U.E !
~
Great poem with alot of power,as it makes me think of you each & every hour!! I LOVED IT!!!
Lots Of Love,
DAN!!!!
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Re: -x-x-x-x-Harem-x-x-x-x-
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 02:33:37 AM AEST
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wooweee lol sue this is hot .
wow who would of thought .lmao
naughty girl.j/k
awsome write |
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