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I Remember...
Contributed by
mannyrich
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Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 01:39:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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When you kiss me that night
under the lonely moonlight
I remember my teary eyes
while our hearts are saying goodbye
I remember the lonesome river
where we share our romantic years
I can't forget its cold water
as cold as the end of our affair
I remember the comely flower
that you give as a first gift
The smell that touch my loving heart
The thorns that bleed my aching heart
I remember the sweet promises
that we made under the lonely moonlight
making me wait in the lonesome river
to receive in the end a pain of heart
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mannyrich
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2005-05-18 01:39:58]
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Re: I Remember...
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 01:46:09 AM AEST
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A bit sad but awesomely written.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: I Remember...
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by SocialMisfit on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 02:27:15 AM AEST
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touching, and sadly beautifal, i love the last stanza the most
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Re: I Remember...
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by bethers_is_my_baby on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 06:44:18 AM AEST
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| so sad! :( but a good poem! :) |
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Re: I Remember...
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by sride686 on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 10:29:52 AM AEST
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| A good write but it was sad but at the same time I did enjoy it. You did a great job at showing your emotions and drawing the reader in. Take care and keep your head up….Steve |
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Re: I Remember...
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 06:00:33 AM AEST
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Sad but beautifully written..
Jenni |
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Re: I Remember...
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by Karazoul on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 06:35:38 PM AEST
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| Oh wow!!! This is so touching.....excellent write.... |
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