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Mourning For September
Contributed by
Spartan
on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 05:10:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Shades of grey fill my eyes
Everything turns black and white
Smeared ink stains
Run down my face
Now it's safe to say
You will be a few months late
Calander days on Calander days
Puts everything in its place
You missed a birthday
And two graduate dates
But we miss you more
Always and everyday
Mourning for September
Thats when you are due
Mourning for September
I'am here, waiting for you
Copyright ©
Spartan
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2005-05-18 17:10:06]
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Re: Mourning For September
(User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 07:39:02 PM AEST
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Very sad... the poem is unclear as to whether
or not he is dead and leaves the reader with
unanswered questions, but I guess those
are the best poems. I really liked this lots of
imagery and just all around great.
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Re: Mourning For September
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 03:00:25 PM AEST
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Simple but eloquent, and I like the imagery. Somewhat moving, as well. Nicely done, and welcome to the site. Keep writing!
Andrew |
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Re: Mourning For September
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by Freda_Burrel on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 12:01:41 AM AEST
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| fantastic poem .... well written ... looking forward to reading more |
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