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Building Verse
Contributed by
Man_On_High
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Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 11:11:52 PM in AEST
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Blessed are we
who build with pen
upon the parchment white..
how similar these things can be
to buildings and their height.
For blood and sweat
with brick and stone
upon the landscape lay
are as to those
who ink about the nighttime
and the day.
Foundations or a metaphore
hammer nails and glue;
a journey to the hundreth floor
the panoramic veiw.
The creation of "Sililoquy"
or serious conjecture,
who ever thought that poetry
could be as architecture.
B
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Man_On_High
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2005-05-18 23:11:52]
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Re: Building Verse
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 11:16:16 PM AEST
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and this you built with pure talent my friend I love it
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Re: Building Verse
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by The_Callif on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 11:28:18 PM AEST
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great poem, i love the first line
"Blessed are we
who build with pen"
the whole poem is great and so true |
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Re: Building Verse
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by MorningDove on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 11:57:12 PM AEST
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A unique view on poetry. I like this thought. Great write.
Rita |
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Re: Building Verse
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 01:31:56 AM AEST
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Very unique and refreshing.
great job. |
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Re: Building Verse
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 02:11:40 PM AEST
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A great poetic blueprint, though u r fortuneate
your skill has brought u happiness, unlike
the pain mine has brought me, nevertheless
a well crafted poem u r truly a poet in every
sence of the word . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Building Verse
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by Silent-No-More on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 12:48:24 AM AEST
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Ahhh, metapoetry.... you've got my attention!
I've long believed that it is a sign of a true poet that he/she cannot help but consider the art of poetry itself... most particularly, when they cannot stop themselves from putting those ponderings to the page. To write poetry of poetry is, I think, a most worthy endeavor.
And yes, I'd have to agree.... to be a writer is to be blessed. Well done.
Build on, MOH!
~Snemmy~ |
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