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Whitehaven By Night Revisited
Contributed by
adsalamon
on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 11:05:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Souped up car, drum & bass blaring
Drowns out those trying to sing
Tom Jones or Elvis, drunk pub karaoke
Girls in mini skirts, brave cold sea breze
Whistling at shirted guys, trying to tease
Before falling over drunk and laughing
Kebab shop queue, primal need for greasy mess
Curry sauce drips down some skimpy dress
As she shouts taxi in middle of road
Two tall guys stare, curse and swear
While their girls just pull hair
Others form a circle, swaggering circus clowns
Police van waits watching on standby
While heartbroken one begins to cry
Her guys gone off, some best mate!
Smashed up bottles of cheap nasty beer
Litter the floor like diamonds clear
While girl vomits on someones doorstep
Thousands of years of civilisation
And this is a night of fun in our nation?
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adsalamon
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2005-05-19 11:05:09]
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Re: Whitehaven By Night Revisited
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 07:07:08 PM AEST
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| This could be my town your talking about. So true and so sad. In fact this could be almost any town or city in the Uk. Christopher. |
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