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Internal pain
Contributed by
Lucinda
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Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 11:36:26 AM in AEST
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Sometimes I get the feeling
When I think Im all alone
That I am being watched
From somewhere comes a groan
It sounds like somebodys in pain
Its like they're being hurt
Its as if they know Im with them
But theres bloodstains on my shirt
Nobody has touched me
To the naked eye Im fine
Perhaps it isnt blood
Perhaps its paint of wine?
I feel a burning in my chest
A stabbing in my heart
Its as if my life is over
Or is this a brand new start?
I seem to feel all cool and fresh
I can see a beaming light
The pain has gone as I walk on
Through a tunnel whos end is bright!
Copyright ©
Lucinda
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2005-05-19 11:36:26]
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Re: Internal pain
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by SPSM on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 12:01:07 PM AEST
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| Pretty good for a random poem. It sounds like a out of body experience or a spirit not yet gone event. Not that I personally know about these things, I love movies though. |
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Re: Internal pain
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by Lucinda on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 02:35:41 PM AEST
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| I'd say thats just about the wierdest thing i have ever written, it has no particular meaning and makes very little sense but it cured my bordom! And maybe someone might find thier own sense in it, its open to interpretation! |
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