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After The Gunfire Finally Dies Down.
Contributed by
ForeverAndADay
on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 05:05:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
war
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Moments roaming, Silence. The sound of wind passing over the tops of topless trees. Passing sand. The river as it sways like a dancer and makes its way up on land. A dozen black birds flying into the horizon. Stars exploding... Echoes... The world as it does another lazy spin. A plane passing over head... The bitter air of long dwindling regret... A snapping sound as musket falls, and breaks in half. The crackling of fire... The hissing of sparks... a train that travels many miles away. There are a hundred sounds... On the battle ground... But apparently... Nothing much else to say...
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Re: After The Gunfire Finally Dies Down.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 04:24:31 PM AEST (User
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This is a poem really well peppered with well-written word pictures. Very good write. |
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