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Black Electricity.
Contributed by
ForeverAndADay
on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 05:07:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Black electric.
Her eyes burn through him.
The flame utters breath...
He falls under her heavy gaze.
Their eyes lock...
Last breath...
The sky is full of black electricity.
Fingers sway...
Burned away...
Coals leave markings in the open air.
In the night,
You can see...
The stars have fallen,
black sky stretch bare...
Holy fire...
Hellish Ray...
Octave soundwave...
Berthed to breath lies.
My eyes are full of black electricity.
God only knows...
Child of hope...
Brain damage...
eyeless brainless oafs.
Calm to the touch...
And all worked up...
Cowards,
Heros...
They all hold a grudge.
Night watch...
Graveyard...
Trainwreck...
Starved...
The wind spread fire...
fiercely it swallows...
Everything up.
This circle is made with black electricity...
The storm begins and ends...
The world begins and ends...
The day breaks...
The night falls...
Time passes...
Life crawls...
Death
famine
pestilence...
War...
Darkness...
Ice
Fire,
Wind...
Packed together in
Black Electricity.
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2005-05-19 17:07:04]
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Re: Black Electricity.
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by Fears on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 05:58:49 PM AEST
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| a good write. Dep and dark, a good combonation of types. |
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Re: Black Electricity.
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by shelby on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 07:08:50 PM AEST
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dark and electirc I like it
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Re: Black Electricity.
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by flamingblade on
Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 06:00:44 PM AEST
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and i thought my poems were dark . its really
good and powerful. All i can say is WOW.
keep it up . |
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Re: Black Electricity.
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by Chibi on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 07:26:45 PM AEST
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| i love the power and mystery you hind behind it, great job |
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