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Broken
Contributed by
cutes252
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Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 08:25:31 PM in AEST
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Emptiness consumes me
blackness takes over my mind
I sit staring blankly
letting my thoughts unwind
Tears streaming out of unblinking eyes
people going by so fast
Im screaming so loud inside
but you cant change the past
My body is an empty shell
my heart is lying broken on the floor
Im screaming and crying and yelling....
I CANT TAKE NO MORE!!
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2005-05-19 20:25:31]
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Re: Broken
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by mylady on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 11:58:53 PM AEST
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| I know the feeling very well. The poem was sad , so sorry for the lost of your friend . |
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Re: Broken
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by Jen54 on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 12:08:10 AM AEST
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| I know that feeling. two weeks ago my friend tried to commit suicide. I didn't know what happened to her all I knew that there was something wrong. Great Write!! keep it up. |
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Re: Broken
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by cutes252 on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 03:59:35 PM AEST
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| thanks you guys!! |
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Re: Broken
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 10:49:32 PM AEST
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| I know how you feel. I lost a friend (he was like a brother) that i have known for 9 years last month. His death was sudden for awhile i didn't understand why he had to leave and i really to this day don't understand. It hurts but memories are the best and always remember they are looking down upon you. Hope you feel better. Thanks for sharing |
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Re: Broken
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by cutes252 on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 01:22:16 AM AEST
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| yea i always look up and talk to him...i can feel him all around me...i think the pain will always be there but i try to tell myself he is in a better place now |
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Re: Broken
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by Wachumiri on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 02:38:27 PM AEST
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You've expressed your pain and agony very well.
Take care.
David |
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