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Immortality Does Not Exist
Contributed by
blue_angel
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Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 08:32:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Singing
Spirit; take me up in arms with you
Giving
Soul; free me, show me the way through
Living
Heart; carry me into eternity
Bringing
Feeling; take me to the perpetuity
Breathing
Life; save me, let me live
Beating
Truth; oh this soul let it give
Meaning
Hope; from happiness missed
Sheathing
Trust; immortality does not exist
Here on earth
We are bound to our blatant horizons
But with rebirth
We are the place we rest our eyes in
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blue_angel
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2005-05-19 20:32:00]
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Re: Immortality Does Not Exist
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by Jaycee on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 08:38:27 PM AEST
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| Another thought provoking poem from that fertile mind of yours. The poem seems to embrace a resurrection theme where life is finite, painful and release from that life is the goal, the reward, the happiness. A very good write and interesting style with the one word prefixes in the first 2 stanzas. Nice job. |
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Re: Immortality Does Not Exist
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by spazz911 on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 08:56:37 PM AEST
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| songlike quality....i like its rythm |
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Re: Immortality Does Not Exist
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by GingerB on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 10:32:01 PM AEST
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'Food For Thought'
Good write.
Ginny |
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