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APWNT
Contributed by
darkcutterBree
on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 09:01:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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a spark that starts the fire
that burns throughout my mind
untold secrets & many lies
the golden thread in which we bind
amongst embers in the skies.
tragedy and heroic tale we seek
between these dark vigils keep
though the path is fallen steep
my destiny from where i sleep.
i take my blade and my gun
to the woods to have some fun
its only early now
but weve just begun
i cannot wait till the moring sun.
an anxious nagging at my mind
grows into a lust of hate
my bood will allways race
and it will boil and burn
everytime i see your smiling face.
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2005-05-19 21:01:30]
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Re: APWNT
(User Rating: 1 )
by heartless_soul on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 09:18:06 PM AEST
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| very emotional yes, and told so well you expressed your feelings surprisingly well. You coverd all the bases hate, sadness, anger, joy, etc. etc. very good, I did likre this one although I do hope that this is just you writing and not something that you are thinking about, just know that we are all here if you need to talk. Be well |
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