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The Importance (of parentheses)
Contributed by
Eve
on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 09:38:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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That's what it's lacking -
emotion, darling!
(Just fake a smile and nod along)
I'm not going to dismiss tomorrow
just because it's the last day of the month
(It's all you can do, really)
Well I know if I pretend they didn't matter
I can make myself believe it
(And it won't hurt as much, right?)
I don't expect you to understand what I'm saying
(But you can dismiss me)
((instead of tomorrow, of course))
Stop the insanity!
(There's no end to madness)
Step right left left right forward-back
You're there!
(Actually, you never really got anywhere.)
Copyright ©
Eve
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2005-05-19 21:38:32]
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Re: The Importance (of parentheses)
(User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 02:43:42 AM AEST
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Nothing like forging ahead, braving the fiercest of storms, traversing the most pernicious of paths...and winding up right back where you started.
Equal parts philosophical and magical, i'm so glad I got to see this.
Keep writing (you inspire more than you may realize),
-V.S. |
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