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Glass Heart
Contributed by
pixie
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Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 05:14:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Heart is made of glass
It will shatter on the floor
If it falls again.
Copyright ©
pixie
... [
2005-05-20 05:14:59]
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Re: Glass Heart
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by venkat on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 05:32:23 AM AEST
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| Aww Pixie..please keep it safe..seems all your haikus are emotional & beautifully done.. venkat |
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Re: Glass Heart
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by brokenwings on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 05:50:01 AM AEST
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| beautiful pixie simply beautiful |
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Re: Glass Heart
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by In_a_while on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 07:40:28 AM AEST
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| Very nice! and so very true! It's nice to see structure in a poem like a haiku, it's a twist on what's normally seen here. Keep up the strong writing! |
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Re: Glass Heart
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 08:09:12 AM AEST
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Good 2 see u writing pix and as always wheather 3 lines or 33 lines beautifully
writting poetry and wisdom . . .
Dorian Chambers
((((((4pix))))))) |
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Re: Glass Heart
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by Scarlett on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 08:26:50 AM AEST
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| short, concise and powerful. i enjoyed readin this |
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Re: Glass Heart
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by bethie on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 09:27:40 AM AEST
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| Beautiful little haiku. Very good. |
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Re: Glass Heart
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 11:14:27 AM AEST
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This is really deep for so few words. I'm not big on haiku's but you seem to have a knack for the true meaning of what one is and is suppose to be! Great job Pix!
Angel always...joni |
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Re: Glass Heart
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 06:45:58 AM AEST
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A really emotive Haiku Kriss. It's good to see your poems back here.
Miss ya loads.
Jane xxx |
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Re: Glass Heart
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 01:38:41 PM AEST
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| wow Pixie girl this is amazing. |
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Re: Glass Heart
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 12:57:42 AM AEST
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Dear Little Pixie,
I loved your Haiku Pixie, but I hope the heart you are talking about is not yours!
Warm love and hugs,
ConSue |
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Re: Glass Heart
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 09:49:56 PM AEST
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| ::puts protective covering over heart:: now you can let it fall without worry. =] very nice haiku pixie by the way. |
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