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No one, supposedly, controls you
Contributed by
jyssvw
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Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 11:20:23 AM in AEST
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This smoky air
Is suffocating my senses
Calculating my despair
Ive acquired numerous losses
Although they can never compare
To the masses
They strike a chord within me
Exacerbating the catalyst
Everyone has a job to do
I guess they should do them well
No one, supposedly, controls you
Yet your sprit is jailed
You control your destiny
That myth has been dispelled
In this new world irony
The path is concealed
The nature grows around me
Where has the judgment sunk
Are we machines feeding on money
With our emotions locked in the trunk
Is this all that remains of huminty
The decency that withstood time,
Slowly has withered and shrunk
Debate me if you disagree
I dare you, enter your plea
I could swear your smirking face
Is shouting you are guilty
I'll let you down gently
I'll even give you the remedy
The trick to achieving serenity
Is to set your body free
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jyssvw
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2005-05-20 11:20:23]
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Re: No one, supposedly, controls you
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by bethie on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 11:43:35 AM AEST
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| Point taken. I couldn't have conveyed this message any better. Well written. Thanks. |
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Re: No one, supposedly, controls you
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 12:51:27 PM AEST
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depressing in its truth, yet not all in the world is sadness.
nicely written. |
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Re: No one, supposedly, controls you
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 02:17:04 AM AEST
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| Hey! How did you sneak this one past me?? Hmmm...look at the difference a week can make! Scorp ; ) |
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