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Love can be wine
Contributed by
in_a_while
on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 12:26:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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she stopped to see, the sparkling in me
love's just a memory
she waits to be heard, like a tree forest bird
love's just a memory
she's like a fawn, a glimpse before gone
love's just a memory
she's like the lake, you touch but can't take
love's just a memory
she spoke in whispers, but not to bad listeners
love's just a memory
she stole my love, set it free like a dove
love's just a memory
a memory...
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2005-05-20 12:26:45]
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Re: Love can be wine
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 12:36:00 PM AEST
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very heartfelt and almost nastolgic.
Great job! |
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Re: Love can be wine
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by Sahara on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 12:36:46 PM AEST
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very sweet, almost lyrical
Sonya |
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Re: Love can be wine
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by sride686 on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 01:02:53 PM AEST
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| So much love in this write but yet so much lose. I bet if you wrote about romance it would be beautiful and worded as well as the rest. But I like what you write now and it goes great with my life right now. This write really is like the lyrics in a song and was write so well. Take care and my hats off to another great write. Later DW…Steve |
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