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Love Will Remain
Contributed by
sride686
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Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 12:47:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Hold me as were together tonight
And maybe youll hold me for the rest of your life
For my love will always be true
And my heart only wants to be with you
So hold me tight as we lay together tonight
For this love feels so write when Im in your arms
Like this love we have could never do harm
As Im lost in your stare as were left lying here
So kiss my lips and caress my soul
And cherish this love Ill forever show
And hold me in your arms safe from all lifes harm
For are love is fare and its a love that we shall share
For in your eyes I look and dream
Of a love thats forever meant to be
Now Im lost in time as Im lost in this rhyme
A rhyme of love so true as I dream of loving you
Love has pain but your love Ill hold
Ill wait love out event though the cold
Event through the dark and through the rain
Are love shall stay true and always remain
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2005-05-20 12:47:29]
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Re: Love Will Remain
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by poet70 on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 12:58:31 PM AEST
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a very beautiful love and fomace poem, good job, I really was drawn into it. Great writing.
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Re: Love Will Remain
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by In_a_while on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 01:08:29 PM AEST
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| Another great write. It was so heartfelt and longing; i look forward to more of your fine work. I don't know where you get it, they're so strong and consistent. Keep up the good work. dw |
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Re: Love Will Remain
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 02:02:59 PM AEST
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Ahh the feeling of love. May you feel it in all that you do!
Nice poem, this lovey dovey style suits you. :-)
Be well!
angel always...joni |
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Re: Love Will Remain
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 10:55:30 PM AEST
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| Very nice poem Steve! I'm glad to see you're thinking happy thoughts again...I know it can't be easy right about now. Hold strong to that special love you have....Take care, Scorp. |
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Re: Love Will Remain
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by mina-1 on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 11:54:41 PM AEST
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Steve this is so touching and so beautifully sweet. It reflects all the love u have inside ur heart. Ur heart speaks of true love. Your ability to be able to express your deepest emotions is absolutely incredible. You write with perfection especially about matters of the heart. Your heart yearns for the love it's missing. Know that ur beautiful heart is always loved and cared for my dear friend. May God always watch over u and ur comrades dearest Steve.
love always,
~sue~ |
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