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Yet to know
Contributed by
Derpinguin44
on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 09:55:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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In my head
I feel dead
Can it be
I can't see
The darkening space
In front of my face?
Nothing there
Something here
I can see
What's to be
The darkening space
In front of my face.
Afterwards
A few words
Can describe
My marred life
The darkening space
Was always my face.
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2005-05-20 21:55:25]
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Re: Yet to know
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by poet70 on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 10:16:42 PM AEST
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| Not to many people take the time to comment on sad poems much, but I do, cos sometimes I find it hard for writers to pour our their emotions, open up their wounds for everyone to read and see, so it takes guts and somd damn good writing to do where you just went, I liked it, sad but good write. Tammi |
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