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Picture
Contributed by
TheKid
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Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 10:03:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
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If a picture is worth a thousand words
How come mine are full of blurs?
If a picture creates a thousand reminiscences
How come mine are full of imperfections?
If a picture tells a thousand tales
How come I always seem to fail?
If a painter painted the perfect picture
With the perfect words
With the perfect reminiscences
And the perfect tales
Im sure, he would never prevail.
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Re: Picture
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by poet70 on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 10:12:57 PM AEST
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| Wow i really liked your poem, Picture, great write, don't stop keep it up. Tammi |
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Re: Picture
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by Fears on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 10:25:26 PM AEST
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If a picture is worth a thousand words
How come mine are full of blurs?
so true...so true and amazingky written. I loved it! So...different and full of emotion. Good job! |
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Re: Picture
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by Sahara on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 10:22:46 AM AEST
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Good write, I really liked it.
Although reading it the old cliche "beauty is in the eye of the beholder" did spring to mind.... just something that we all most remember.
Sonya |
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