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THE POINT...
Contributed by
sweetoccasion29
on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 10:26:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Remember when?
This or that
he or she,
the past, whats
the point, no need
to discuss it
I cant go back
it will never change
cemented in my mind
always the same
I wish I would've , could've
should've, stop wishing ,
the pieces I never found
will remain missing
Unsolved mysteries
unattainable answers
the past so persistent
constantly taunting
my mind, ravishing my
soul, turning to dust
freezing cold....
Copyright ©
sweetoccasion29
... [
2005-05-20 22:26:34]
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Re: THE POINT...
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 01:36:26 PM AEST
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Damm i never knew u were this good, girl i love your style 2nd only, 2 over the top, and i beleive u have gone beyond that point, a verry skillfull and lovely peace of writting . . .
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