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Confusion
Contributed by
lovestruck
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Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 01:53:53 AM in AEST
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Theres confusion in my head
Running rampant through my mind
People tell me different things
Confusing contradicting things
I love you; I love you I do lie
I love you; I love you they lie too
Love my friend is hard to find
True loves what I longed to find
Now Ive found it cant let him see
How much I really want to be
Joined in marriage for eternity
With me by his side and him by mine
Why cant I just let him see
How much that he means to me
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lovestruck
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2005-05-21 01:53:53]
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Re: Confusion
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by Chey on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 02:35:33 AM AEST
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| A real struggle. Best of luck. Chey |
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Re: Confusion
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by Sinned on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 06:39:20 AM AEST
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Lovestruck
Be honest and you will see
Whatever will be will be
If he loves you he will never flee
If this story is true
I wish the best for both of you
A very emotional poem
Well done
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Re: Confusion
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 03:58:42 PM AEST
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This was a very honest write, and I think it can be hard oftentimes to open yourself right up to someone...even someone very close. You may find it's a great weight off your shoulders if you allow someone to share your load though....Good job on the poem!
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Re: Confusion
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 10:14:26 AM AEST
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beautifully written:) hugs n' love nessa
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