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The fall
Contributed by
loopylou
on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 05:37:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The rain falls
tears held tight in glassy eyes
if one should slip
its just anouther tear in a waterfall
Today i split myself in two
half of me loves
and half of me hates you
terrorised by hurt
which i claim is hate
I try to turn the clock back
but it's all too late
Just waiting for another disappointment
a bump in the road
walking around with my eyes closed
A smile from an evil king
i'm at a loss
i'm completey taken in
As i fall so desperately
taking everybody with me
This is not the love of fairytales
but a story of disaster
as wood splinters
and hearts shatter
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loopylou
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2005-05-21 17:37:31]
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Re: The fall
(User Rating: 1 )
by bethers_is_my_baby on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 06:14:23 PM AEST
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| wow, i feel your pain as it is very well expressed in this poem! great job! :) |
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