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Seduction in Faith
Contributed by
Blu
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Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 06:15:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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I have wandered the lidded flames under your brow and found secrets
that you and I share that you felt inside of me or looking down as though the movement of your body was the movement of my body
and we both smiled because I felt it with my hand
where wine was spilled running down to where I rose conquering your body
(as I swayed from your pleasure)
feeling our secret burn with our fires the flames that we've created
because it is created in silence- a song for our ears a hymn to gods we worship
and we can sing it let the open window be witness- the bedroom too- to our voices
when they grow hurried with the anticipation
and cry out with release
the languid movements prove that we have prayed (such a seduction in faith)
when bodies meet in prayer and sing together and wait for tomorrow night
when I know I will rise again out of the trunk of my lover and wander the fire behind your eyes.
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Blu
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2005-05-21 18:15:07] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Seduction in Faith
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kayan on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 10:01:44 PM AEST (User
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My god that was sexy...
I smell a torrid love affair Blu!
Haha! Very very well done, this just oozes sexuality.
Kayan |
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Re: Seduction in Faith
(User Rating: 1 ) by harlot20 on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 04:35:00 AM AEST (User
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that is really really well written. how youve mixed together faith and sexual tensions. just wonderful. perfect even :) |
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