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Subliminal Manipulation
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
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Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 08:01:51 PM in AEST
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You meddle in a dangerous game
Systematic for you to be cynical
Drowning in your own sorrow and pain
You and what you hate are now identical
Broken homes and screams all around
Does'nt mean you have to dig your own grave
You choose how you want to hear the sounds
But you never hold on to a thing anyone has to say
You lay down for death and wait for it to come
Seated in the darker side of life
. . .
As you will never change the way you read redrum
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ForeverAlone
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2005-05-21 20:01:51]
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Re: Subliminal Manipulation
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by Unbreakable on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 08:13:00 PM AEST
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Okay..so I do think that the poem is really cool...you have a really poetic way of saying everything..lol..the only thing I DON'T understand is the end...so I know that redrum is from "The Shining" and I know that if you spell it backwards it spells murder, but beyond that I'm lost!! Did the person in your poem murder someone??? Anyway..good write, if you want to pm me or something to explain the end to me, that would be awesome!
Krystal |
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Re: Subliminal Manipulation
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by Zeldianus on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 08:18:50 PM AEST
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| thsi is very good, clark. it took me a minute to get what you were talking about but i do like it. Keep it up! |
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Re: Subliminal Manipulation
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 09:25:57 PM AEST
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| =] lovely poem, lovely poem. i especially love the person you wrote it about, i think you portrayed her completely wrong though, lol. =] she is a sweet, caring, and compassionate person, nothing like this. she wouldnt even think of doing murder, geez. great poem though, clark. i cant help but like the poetic way you put it. |
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Re: Subliminal Manipulation
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by kydistortion69 on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 11:55:19 PM AEST
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| very cryptic and delightful..I like this poem especially the last line..good write.. |
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Re: Subliminal Manipulation
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by mina-1 on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 12:51:41 AM AEST
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Clark what can I say? You never cease to amaze me by producing such remarkable and flawless writes. Keep it up my dear friend. I truly love ur awesome work.
*hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: Subliminal Manipulation
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 01:21:32 AM AEST
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i like this...the first part of the poem was excellent i really liked it, great word use
but yes i didnt understand the last bit either but thats okay, some stanzas are not meant to be understood so i dont think it ruins the poem,,,just adds to its mystery
well done |
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