|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
heres some darkness for ya...
Contributed by
Man_On_High
on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 08:19:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
|
In the shaping of time
the world will fall from life and lies
into the midnight sun
Unbrideled mirth
memories of secrets and sublime reign
sent to Hell in a burst
of sulphur and cloven myth
The moon will rise through Eden and ((shake))
freezing waters no frost could harden
Wisemen will melt and die in the wake of new garden Gods
who would weave a new evil
on a southern tree,
boiling the depths of plasmic seas
Heaven's Hill torn away in a frenzied lust
of sin and deprivation
while the new Gods stroll the way
forked tounge on the fruit
Speaking serpents now the central plane
as their silhouettes burn against the crimson sky
in the shaping of time
Copyright ©
Man_On_High
... [
2005-05-21 20:19:13]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: heres some darkness for ya...
(User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 08:57:27 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
this is a good poem. i like it. especially the second and last stanzas. they have a lot of meaning to me. keep up the good work!
~sprints |
|
|
Re: heres some darkness for ya...
(User Rating: 1 )
by TheVoice on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 09:11:41 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
You are right, it is dark.
Great piece.
The Voice
|
|
|
Re: heres some darkness for ya...
(User Rating: 1 )
by Quilted_rag_doll on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 09:30:18 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
In the shaping of time
the world will fall from life and lies
into the midnight sun
pretty good...i like what you wrote it about and all...
Auryn
|
|
|
Re: heres some darkness for ya...
(User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 10:25:14 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
very dark almost skerrrd me nicely written once again you have a flare with the pen
Michelle |
|
|
Re: heres some darkness for ya...
(User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 11:17:05 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This is an excellent piece of work, Billy, but I don't believe the universe would allow this to exist. We have terror and sadness in our world now, but we also have peace and beauty and love that runs parallel alongside it. There may always be evil but there will always be good also.
Peace,
Rita |
|
|
Re: heres some darkness for ya...
(User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 12:40:55 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
i enjoyed this not only a taste of things 2 come but what may be happening right now under our noses . . .
Dorian Chambers |
|
|
Re: heres some darkness for ya...
(User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 12:43:51 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Billy a thought provoking piece of poetry written with immense darkness. You never cease to amaze me with ur remarkable ability to produce such flawless writes. I loved it. well done.
*hug*
~sue~ |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Site Help
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
