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Full Moon Rising
Contributed by
Rakerman1999
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Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 08:53:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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I saw a full moon rising
Within the sky so clear
And three stars danced to music
That no one else could hear
The trees looked on in silence
As twilight gained its hold
A rhythm held unchanging
From endless days of old
The crickets sing their chorus
Nocturnal serenade
The same as that first sunset
When Earth was newly made
A nighttime breeze blew softly
A chill upon the air
And I was lost in wonder
And peace beyond compare
'Tis true this world is troubled
'Tis true that man's to blame
But Nature will prevail
In this eternal game
And she will be the victor
O'er hate and greed and lust
While greatest Kings and Kingdoms
Will fade to naught but dust
L. Carling c2005
Copyright ©
Rakerman1999
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2005-05-21 20:53:03]
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Re: Full Moon Rising
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by ForeverAlone on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 08:56:45 PM AEST
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That ending is just awesome Larry, the poem was beautiful and captivating, your talent shined thru your words...Amazing
~Clark |
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Re: Full Moon Rising
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 09:12:45 PM AEST
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I am absolutely moved beyond words...
this poem has everything...
style..
passion..
timing..
imagery
everything!
fantastic write!
amazing..
M.O.H.
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Re: Full Moon Rising
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by shelby on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 09:45:08 PM AEST
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| a melody upon my screen Larry |
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Re: Full Moon Rising
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by XxNights_ChildxX on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 09:56:21 PM AEST
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absolutely mesmorizing....wow...great poem
very well written, beautiful immagery here...
good job
Jenni xxoo |
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Re: Full Moon Rising
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by GingerB on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 10:08:34 PM AEST
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Amazing write, Mr. Carling.
Ginny |
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Re: Full Moon Rising
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 11:12:44 PM AEST
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Splendiferous Larry;
The universe shall always be the victor and we her awed captives. Just a mere lifetime to enjoy the beauty makes me sad. I do so hope there is reincarnation.
Peace,
Rita |
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Re: Full Moon Rising
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 12:09:16 AM AEST
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This was spellbinding Larry the ending to
this was very inspiring and uplifting. I loved
the imagery in the first two stanzas its so
good it deserves a Sleeman's! Bottoms up!
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Full Moon Rising
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by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 12:34:46 AM AEST
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Very visual i like the scenario as i was reading it . . . Barkeep,u know the drill . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Full Moon Rising
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by Nazmythian on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 03:40:22 AM AEST
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As always Larry ... flawless flow and wise words make your poetry a delight to read. Thank you for this ... I wholeheartedly agree.
Nazzy ~
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Re: Full Moon Rising
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 06:29:55 AM AEST
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Well what more can i say that everyone else has tols you already.
This was great Larry it really is. 5 stars from me.
Jane |
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Re: Full Moon Rising
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by sweetangeluk on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 06:41:13 AM AEST
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A million gold stars for u for this magnificent gorgeous piece of poetry.
Beautiful beyond words
Love Angelxx |
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Re: Full Moon Rising
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 11:21:31 PM AEST
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Lovely story Larry I loved the sense of
triumph at the end. Definitely a great write.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Full Moon Rising
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by vibes2go on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 04:04:18 AM AEST
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| do you think good triumphs over evil? tonight I feel trampled upon and .. so maybe it's as you've said .. I am the evil.. and this is good making it's triumph ... you think? |
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